Erm.....
ooooookay. this was sort of .... bad.
Firstly, you need a preloader. It sucks to hear sound but not see a damn thing until the movie's finished loading.
Even when I finished loading the movie, I watched it. In all honesty, I can see where you were going with it, but you really need some character development. You should take into account that everyone that sees your movie doesn't know anything about it, and you should give your production that kind of treatment.
We can't get into the heart of your action when we don't know your heart yet. Next time, plan what you're going to do before you do it.